Check this reading before I send it

A last pass for vagueness and overreach before someone else reads it.

Read what I have written below as an editor who does not flatter. Quote every line that would be true of almost anyone. Quote anything that predicts an event or speaks with certainty about a third person. Then name the one change that would most improve it. If it is already sound, say so plainly rather than inventing faults.

Reading:

Writing and craft. Horoscope voice, ritual text, card descriptions, and fiction built from the archetypes.