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Any draft that says what you mean but takes too long to say it.
Cut the text below by about 30%. Keep every idea. Lose the words carrying them inefficiently. Target in this order: 1. Hedges and throat-clearing: "I think", "it seems that", "in order to", "the fact that", "basically", "really". 2. Sentences that restate the previous sentence. 3. Adverbs and intensifiers doing no work. 4. Nominalisations: "make a decision" becomes "decide", "provide assistance" becomes "help". 5. Whole sentences that exist only to introduce the next one. Return the edited version first. Then a short list: what you cut and why. If a passage is already tight, leave it and say so rather than rewriting it to look busy. Text:
Cutting and compressing. Getting a draft shorter, to a word count, or down to a summary that still says everything.
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