Move the ask to the opening line

A request buried under two paragraphs of context.

Rewrite this so the ask is in the first sentence, the deadline is in the second, and everything else is context a reader can skip. Keep it under 120 words. If there is no clear ask in my draft, tell me that before rewriting anything.

Draft:

Structure and flow. Order, openings, endings, headlines and the joins that hold a piece together.