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The words are right and the lineation feels arbitrary.
Re-break the stanza below without changing a single word. Give me three versions: one that lands a strong noun or verb at each line end, one heavily enjambed, one in lines roughly half the length. One sentence under each on what it does to the pace. Then commit to one. Stanza:
Rewriting lines and stanzas. The line that is dead, the lineation that feels arbitrary, the verb that is doing nothing.
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