Rewrite this for a phone screen

A long message going to someone who reads everything on the move.

Rewrite this so it reads on a phone without scrolling. The conclusion in the first two lines, any dates or conditions as an actual list, and nothing that exists only to show I did the work. Then show me the sentences you cut, so I can restore anything you were wrong to drop.

Draft:

Drafts and replies. Turning notes, long drafts and tangled threads into something short enough to read.